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The Battle Part 1

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So this is my second animation which I plan to make into a trilogy.

I know it's short, but it took me 3 hours to make.

So please, I need constructive criticism. 

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The Battle part 1

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5 hours ago, DuallyElemental said:

Much too linear, needs more transitions.

make the scenes look livelier, they look dead inside.

move the camera around more often, so it seems more dramatic

lighting

more scenery

I'm sorry, I'm still new to transitions so I'll try and make follow your advice next time

Ok, thanks for that.

The Camera isn't my speciality, but I'll try

the scene was meant to flat land, with just one tree, but next time I'll think of a better scene

6 minutes ago, Netherall Brimstone said:

Don't go too hard on yourself. Only the pros can do fight scenes lmao.

It's just too slow. But I do fights too fast, so not judging.

Thanks for that!

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