Car Render wallpaper!

[Craft inator 28]

Wallpapers are really fun to make and I am practicing blurring and shadows and things so I made a render featuring my latest car rig Enjoy!

[Primatium 78]

nice

[Skjold 7.6k]

That texture still makes me sick.

[Craft inator 28]

1 minute ago, Skjold said:

That texture still makes me sick.

I'll try to make a different texture.

[Craft inator 28]

Updated version

-Removed Texture

-Added birds 

-Added torches

[Skjold 7.6k]

Much better. Maybe just make the torch glow and have particles

[Craft inator 28]

Here is Final I think.

[Primatium 78]

very nice!

[Craft inator 28]

Thanks for the feedback guys I'm glad this was a Successful Wallpaper

Edited July 11, 2018 by Craft inator

[9redwoods 3.8k]

*cough*

No inspiration here

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Anyways, here's some stuff you need to improve on:

The DOF is way too strong. Try lowering it for better results.

The car is kinda... funky looking. Also, idk what's going on with the window, but there's a lot of noise going on.

I just noticed the bird on the image. It looks very unrealistic and you can see right through it.

The parrot is totally oblivious to the car driving past. Give it a pose and make it look at the car. 

The sidewalk ends abruptly at the bottom

The trees are placed weirdly

The lighting is kinda horrible, try using a spotlight instead of the sun.

It's a very small road. You should make it longer.

The torch isn't emitting any light

(This is a mix of the first and second wallpaper, I got mixed up, sorry, I just realized)

That's all I can see for now. Try improving, and you'll get better.

 

 

 

Edited July 12, 2018 by 9redwoods

[Craft inator 28]

Thx! I'll go update when I get chance.

[Minealif 46]

Look like there is a alpha glitch here........ try make the car or the bird render depth to 2 just open the property and click graphic and done!