Soul Flame

[Super Solomob 422 122]

I made a speedart of this one here. It's for an OC named Sparke who has a long story, I've written it out on fanfiction.net.

But anyway here the picture is.

Give meh crit to devour.

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The fire is not producing light and the lighting in general could be refined. The fog in the background could be a bit more subtle. The bow is almost camouflaged with that tree, the blur/depth of field could be used to blur out the tree to keep the bow in focus and more obvious. The posing of the legs could be a tad better.

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When you realize your mom was giving good advice when she said playing with fire isn't safe.

[Super Solomob 422 122]

On 4/6/2018 at 3:54 PM, ShadowNinja5764 said:

The fire is not producing light and the lighting in general could be refined. The fog in the background could be a bit more subtle. The bow is almost camouflaged with that tree, the blur/depth of field could be used to blur out the tree to keep the bow in focus and more obvious. The posing of the legs could be a tad better.

I did my best to make the fire make light, I put a point light in it, turned off cast shadows on the fire, and turned the brightness on the fire up. That fog is used as smoke, also if I  made it any less the edge of the schematic would be visible, I tried the DOF on the tree, it blurred out half of the body. I should have taken the time to do better leg positions, but I don't see anything wrong with the positioning.