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Criticism:

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  1. Zombie is floating and so is the guy.
  2. Posing could use a lot of improvement (Zombie's right arm isn't posed at all).
  3. Light from torch looks a bit green.
  4. Fire doesn't normally have shadows on it, so turn particle brightness up.
  5. Shadows should be more blueish.

Keep improving!

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Area of Improvements: Zombie is floating, the particles brightness should be at max, and you should turn off the cast shadows. The lighting is too saturated, and I can't see any bends or rotation on the other body parts, except a few minimal degrees. You should probably rotate the arms and legs a bit more, and it would be better if we could actually see the pants, as they are pitch black.

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1 hour ago, MasterArcher12 said:

Area of Improvements: Zombie is floating, the particles brightness should be at max, and you should turn off the cast shadows. The lighting is too saturated, and I can't see any bends or rotation on the other body parts, except a few minimal degrees. You should probably rotate the arms and legs a bit more, and it would be better if we could actually see the pants, as they are pitch black.

The hero beginners deserve 

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15 hours ago, RedAnimator said:

Criticism:

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  1. Zombie is floating and so is the guy.
  2. Posing could use a lot of improvement (Zombie's right arm isn't posed at all).
  3. Light from torch looks a bit green.
  4. Fire doesn't normally have shadows on it, so turn particle brightness up.
  5. Shadows should be more blueish.

Keep improving!

i will try to work on that stuff maybe if i saved the project i can remake it 

thx for the tips 

I changed some settings and did some other stuff and it looks like this 

 

YNcorpf.png

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9 hours ago, thomas said:

i will try to work on that stuff maybe if i saved the project i can remake it 

thx for the tips 

I changed some settings and did some other stuff and it looks like this 

 

YNcorpf.png

You're getting there.

Posing could still use some work.

And there is some random bright water in the top right corner.

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10 hours ago, RedAnimator said:

You're getting there.

Posing could still use some work.

And there is some random bright water in the top right corner.

thx and the water was a problem with the schematic 

 

i will work on my posing 

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