(Wallpaper) Battle Royale (Less mistakes)

[Cryptic Runner 2.3k]

That was me when i first played... PUBG. That egg was DELICIOUS!

 

I did not find any mistake.

Edited March 24, 2018 by Jadturentale
hi

[ShadowGMC 553]

EVERY wallpaper has atleast one flaw.

[crustyjpeg 2.7k]

I can see you have improved, but it's not perfect.      

The light from the fire is much too bright and the hat and pan are a bit weird.

Also could use some extra detail.

But it's much better than your previous wallpapers.     You're on the right track.

[AlfaProductions 512]

The lighting needs work its too yellow in some spots. the pan rig needs work, its just 2 cubes.

You can't say  "I didn't make a mistake" that just shows how prideful you are.

[Bugleberry 1.6k]

It's an improvement, but try making the posing better. 

[Cryptic Runner 2.3k]

43 minutes ago, EnderSculptor said:

I can see you have improved, but it's not perfect.      

The light from the fire is much too bright and the hat and pan are a bit weird.

Also could use some extra detail.

But it's much better than your previous wallpapers.     You're on the right track.

The light from the fire is enough,the pan was supposed to be made like this  (beacause its Minecraft,DUH)

43 minutes ago, alfadog said:

The lighting needs work its too yellow in some spots. the pan rig needs work, its just 2 cubes.

You can't say  "I didn't make a mistake" that just shows how prideful you are.

It's not too yellow in some spots and the thing "I didnt make a mistake" was to tell everybody that i did not see any mistake,no posing mistake

And the pan? It's not 2 cubes,it's a json model.

27 minutes ago, Swift said:

It's an improvement, but try making the posing better. 

Okay,i'l do that next time.

[Emaniplex 6.3k]

You believing that your average-level wallpapers are perfect is an opinion. If you can't handle our opinions on how you can improve your artwork (and there's a lot of room for improvement), you shouldn't post here.

... Is that torch on the right going through the wall? How is it casting a shadow?