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Here is a little poster for my upcoming slapstick comedy short, War For The Lawn.

Unedited:

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Edited W/O Text:

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Edited W/ Text

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As always, constructive criticism is appreciated.

(And if anyone knows how to use those spoiler sections, please let me know. :))

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12 minutes ago, Nzshark6 said:

*Why in the un-edited the lawnmower see through

*You can see the edge of the map

*The tree has three different wood blocks  

*Posing looks stiff (It just looks like he's walking)

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1. The mower was see through because it was a placeholder to add motion blur. Plus, it kept the shadows.

2. I personally have no problems with such things, but I will keep that in mind.

3. That was part of my first custom tree in my survival world. The rest is out of view.

4. Looking at it now, I agree with you. I'll see what I can do about it.

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55 minutes ago, Pootsy35 said:

Posing is horrible.

 

9 hours ago, YoshiHunter said:

4. Looking at it now, I agree with you. I'll see what I can do about it.

 

43 minutes ago, jakubg1 said:

The color of the text "WAR FOR THE LAWN" isn't the best. It could be hard to read. Maybe make it brighter?

I had a gut feeling something was off with it. I will keep that in mind.

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