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Alan Walker - The Spectre

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Che3syPlayz

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Nice idea for an animation, but heres some tips to hopefully help you improve.

1. Needs idle movements.

Make them breath, make their heads bob a bit, and their body bend and unbend and make the arms move in synchronization with the body.

 

2. Change the cloud color to be more fitting to the scene, cause they stand out too much.

 

3. Make the person blink more often. 

I see you're using a face rig, put use to it. Make em' blink, and size the head ever so slightly  on the Z axis. Makes it look more realistic.

 

Other then that, it's a good animation :)

 

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RedAnimator

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It's really good.

Epic fighting!

2 suggestions:

  • Use transitions
  • More blinking

Criticism: On the rig, the eyelids are a bit far from the front of the face.

Other than that, it's really good!

Keep it up!

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