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This isn't any better than your previous one...

The camera angle is pretty bad, look up some camera angle tutorials.

The posing is pretty bad too, make the posing less stiff and make the characters feel more alive.

And the lighting is just bad, look up lighting tutorials like Kiepocu's or something.

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while the vision and concept are there, the execution is absolutely abysmal.
you tried, but it just seems to be lacking in body language and a dynamic environment. just like @Pigeon_ said, i reccommend you look up some mine-imator tutorials on lighting and environmental effects. also, try looking up some pose references and experiment with them.
good luck next time

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This isn't intense, or intense looking.

The posing is really stiff.

The lighting is terrible.

Camera angle really needs some work.

The lightsabers and sphere things clash with the Minecraft style.

For short; You still have a long way to call your wallpapers good.

Have a nice day!

 

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On 11/7/2017 at 2:37 PM, BlueYoshi73 said:

Please stop using this schematic and please stop posting random garbage.

Post something you didn't take 5 minutes on.

I can take as long as I feel necessary, and use whatever I want. It's not garbage, no one ever says that about your work. I didn't take 5 minutes on this, please post things that are CRITISIZM, not hate.

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