Evil Cobalt

[cobaltdude 7]

it is wat it sounds like

Download:http://www.mediafire.com/file/xzxmx9r3lbxov06/Evil_Cobalt.zip

[AnimateTHIS 66]

now that is what i call E D G Y.

[NotAn... 441]

So the character:

• the colors seem all over the place.
• the webs on his arms glove things and shoes also seem a bit out of place.
• what has happened to the eyes?
• the black and brown thing around his stomach also seems a bit out of place.
• just my opinion, but round objects (if not done right) don't really fit in with minecraft's blocky nature.

For this just try to be more consistent with the whole character and don't put too many random colors.

Lighting:

• there aren't really any really visible shadows, so it looks kind of unrendered.

Use spotlights to make the scene look alive.

Posing and how it looks together:

• it doesn't really look like he is holding onto the sword and wall, he doesn't seem to put any effort to climb the building.
• the arms are a bit too straight.
• the placing of him seems to be a bit random.
• the sword doesn't really seem to do anything for the story or the composition of the wallpaper.

Think a bit more about real life and how the human body would look in this situation, (if you are making a wallpaper with "your style" then make it look like everything has a meaning and fits in.) even a little bit of bending can do wonderful things to the pose, think and experiment with the placement of the character, think if some elements are really important and wont distract the viewer.

Everything together:

Try to work on character design, lighting, posing and composition, basically everything. The wallpaper is somewhat decent, but you can do better, now it is just up to you if you want to practice and do your best your works will improve, you just have to have passion for it.

Things that could help you:

 

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

Why though?

[Paul Sheldon 2.5k]

is this image cursed?

Edited October 26, 2017 by Paul Sheldon

[NotAn... 441]

4 minutes ago, Paul Sheldon said:

is this image cursed?

maybe

[cobaltdude 7]

6 hours ago, NotAn... said:

So the character:

• the colors seem all over the place.
• the webs on his arms glove things and shoes also seem a bit out of place.
• what has happened to the eyes?
• the black and brown thing around his stomach also seems a bit out of place.
• just my opinion, but round objects (if not done right) don't really fit in with minecraft's blocky nature.

 

the balck and brown things are straps for the backpack and eyes.......        idk     thnx for feedback