intro Cool Wing Intro Template >:)

[Artamiel Crescent 1.5k]

 

[Caeden117 1.8k]

Everything I am going to say may be summed up in this topic. You should view it anyways.

1. Generic song and generic text intro with "cool" slapped onto it really doesn't give it personality and uniqueness (If that's even a word)
2. The "wings" aren't doing anything apart from just appearing and disappearing from existence.
3. There really isnt anything going on in the background, it's just... bland...
4. It looks like the only thing you spent time on is the text (Which I do like, by the way), and the wings. Everything else seems rushed, and seems to be masked by the camera's movements to sync with the song (Which is what that topic covers), and basic effects (Text changing color, scratches/grain to give it that "VHS" feel, which I also do like.)

It's not a bad intro, but it also could be better. I'm not discouraging you from using text intros, but all I'm asking is for you to spend a bit more time adding more background decoration and maybe have the text doing something apart from changing colors.

[_Blue 228]

What the guy above me said, but it looks cool.

Also btw, Intro is too long. :>

Offtopic: Gimmie them wings.

Edited August 12, 2017 by _BlueAsyl

[Artamiel Crescent 1.5k]

2 hours ago, Caeden117 said:

Everything I am going to say may be summed up in this topic. You should view it anyways.

1. Generic song and generic text intro with "cool" slapped onto it really doesn't give it personality and uniqueness (If that's even a word)
2. The "wings" aren't doing anything apart from just appearing and disappearing from existence.
3. There really isnt anything going on in the background, it's just... bland...
4. It looks like the only thing you spent time on is the text (Which I do like, by the way), and the wings. Everything else seems rushed, and seems to be masked by the camera's movements to sync with the song (Which is what that topic covers), and basic effects (Text changing color, scratches/grain to give it that "VHS" feel, which I also do like.)

It's not a bad intro, but it also could be better. I'm not discouraging you from using text intros, but all I'm asking is for you to spend a bit more time adding more background decoration and maybe have the text doing something apart from changing colors.

ok. 

I'll learn a lot from this and improve.