plz watch its actually pretty guud "The Six Sides" Episode 1: The Fall

[DeltaDino&DeltaAndrew 469]

On 5/2/2017 at 7:33 AM, lifecraft said:

hello person I have never seen before

no

[DeltaDino&DeltaAndrew 469]

aww no one is commenting anymore

[Buhrp 211]

Very well animated. I only had one problem and that was the subtitles were hard to read sometimes. Especially when they were purple. But otherwise great job keep it up!

[DeltaDino&DeltaAndrew 469]

On 5/19/2017 at 9:08 AM, Buhrp said:

Very well animated. I only had one problem and that was the subtitles were hard to read sometimes. Especially when they were purple. But otherwise great job keep it up!

tthhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhx

[AnxiousCynic 1.1k]

Just now saw this, and was thoroughly impressed by many aspects of it. Love the ambitious storytelling and animation, and overall quality of the film making.

My main two critiques would be:

• The "twinning" in animation. In some shots, the character's are sharing the same walk cycle (which is fine), but they're also synchronized; varying the timing of the keyframes a bit would go a long way to making the duplicate walk cycle less noticeable.
• Sound design. While good and clearly effort went into it, some scenes (like the slow-mo arrow hit) could've used some more "punch" to give weight to the events.

Again, quite enjoyed this and admire the effort that went into it - especially considering it was a Mine-imator project. Keep up the good work!

[DeltaDino&DeltaAndrew 469]

3 hours ago, AnxiousCynic said:

Just now saw this, and was thoroughly impressed by many aspects of it. Love the ambitious storytelling and animation, and overall quality of the film making.

My main two critiques would be:

• The "twinning" in animation. In some shots, the character's are sharing the same walk cycle (which is fine), but they're also synchronized; varying the timing of the keyframes a bit would go a long way to making the duplicate walk cycle less noticeable.
• Sound design. While good and clearly effort went into it, some scenes (like the slow-mo arrow hit) could've used some more "punch" to give weight to the events.

Again, quite enjoyed this and admire the effort that went into it - especially considering it was a Mine-imator project. Keep up the good work!

thx for feedback

[DeltaDino&DeltaAndrew 469]

hi mom

[lifecraft 410]

6 hours ago, DeltaDino&DeltaAndrew said:

hi mom

hello sun

Edited June 8, 2017 by lifecraft

[ClassicRampage 20]

Very awesome! The music, sound effects, animation, lighting, and cinematography were well done. My favorite scene would have to be the TNT slow-mo part, that was really cool. 

[DeltaDino&DeltaAndrew 469]

On 6/20/2017 at 4:05 PM, ClassicRampage said:

Very awesome! The music, sound effects, animation, lighting, and cinematography were well done. My favorite scene would have to be the TNT slow-mo part, that was really cool. 

thankssssssssss!

[DeltaDino&DeltaAndrew 469]

On 6/8/2017 at 7:25 AM, lifecraft said:

hello sun

oh..HELP I'M BURNING. from myself

[TheAnimatorDude 38]

Holy moly, this was AMAZING. Allmost everything was perfect. Only the lighting and the walking weren't so good sometimes, but other than that PERFECT

[DeltaDino&DeltaAndrew 469]

On 8/6/2017 at 4:39 AM, TheAnimatorDude said:

Holy moly, this was AMAZING. Allmost everything was perfect. Only the lighting and the walking weren't so good sometimes, but other than that PERFECT

thx! sorry for late reply

[Bugleberry 1.6k]

This is definitely one of my favorite animations. Keep it up!

[DeltaDino&DeltaAndrew 469]

 

This is definitely one of my favorite animations. Keep it up!

i try but i lost a lot of my audience