Minecraft Apocalypse Animation Test [Criticism Needed]

[Jovan0896 666]

Hey guys Jovan here, just wanted to show you guys a little something. I liked the way this turned out. Don't mind the white lines its because my graphics card is a p0tat0. Anyway tell me what you think!

By the way this was inspired by @SharkleSparkle, go check them out I love their videos 

Edited March 25, 2017 by Jovan0896

[Czai Knight 434]

1) Lacks intensity of fighting

2) Animation is a bit floaty for the zombie

3) Slap on a muzzle flash for dem gun shots

4) Add some wound shots or even better, add blood hits, or even better, add them both. Just a suggestion but it would look really nice.

5) Lacks lighting but I guess this is a test animation

6) Scenery should fit with the subject such as the sky as orange or gray-ish color along with a moody ambient color.

7) Get a better sound for a pistol, sounds like airsoft x 10

8) Add an impact sound effect for the zombie

9) The human was alright but the zombie had a few problems in it. I think they're pretty obvious so I think I shouldn't have to point it out.

In my opinion, you should do a decent animation, upload that, then ask for some criticism. A decent timed animation can give us an insight on how efficient you can animate thus we can criticize the animation other than these small, a bit un-polished, tests.

[Jaydenzalez 25]

1) I would have some ambient sounds in the background (Wind, birds, ect.)

2) Impact effects or splattered blood would be nice.

3) Of course you need a muzzle flash, its pretty much essential.

4) Same as above, a less blue and happy sky, more or a dark or scary sky.

5) You should try rigging (Just a suggestion)

6) I personally think the Gun SFX is just fine, the echo is my favorite, it would just be a tad better with some ambient sfx.

7) Try using fog, that might look nice.

8) Was that screen tearing intentional? If not, try to get that fixed :\

9) Just my opinion, but maybe try a different gun model? Something a bit more recognizable, like a Browning M1911, Beretta M9, HK USP.

Overall it's a very good starter, but that's just my opinion... Someone's probably gonna come over here and start yelling "AMATEUR" at me :\

[Jovan0896 666]

1 hour ago, Czai Knight said:

1) Lacks intensity of fighting

2) Animation is a bit floaty for the zombie

3) Slap on a muzzle flash for dem gun shots

4) Add some wound shots or even better, add blood hits, or even better, add them both. Just a suggestion but it would look really nice.

5) Lacks lighting but I guess this is a test animation

6) Scenery should fit with the subject such as the sky as orange or gray-ish color along with a moody ambient color.

7) Get a better sound for a pistol, sounds like airsoft x 10

8) Add an impact sound effect for the zombie

9) The human was alright but the zombie had a few problems in it. I think they're pretty obvious so I think I shouldn't have to point it out.

In my opinion, you should do a decent animation, upload that, then ask for some criticism. A decent timed animation can give us an insight on how efficient you can animate thus we can criticize the animation other than these small, a bit un-polished, tests.

1) Yeah just wanted to show off my gun rig.

2) Could you explain in greater detail?

3) Thanks I'll be sure to do that

4) That's actually a really good criticism, thanks

5) I could fix that by just changing the sun position, thank you for the tip.

6) I could make it darker to make it a bit moodier I see your point in that.

7) That was a .45 pistol sound.

8) I'll be improving on that

9) I kind of see the zombie's movements being a little weird.

Thank you for your criticism, this was very much appreciated , when I remake this I'll be sure to credit you in the title and credits for your help. Thank you very much

 

 

46 minutes ago, Jaydenzalez said:

1) I would have some ambient sounds in the background (Wind, birds, ect.)

2) Impact effects or splattered blood would be nice.

3) Of course you need a muzzle flash, its pretty much essential.

4) Same as above, a less blue and happy sky, more or a dark or scary sky.

5) You should try rigging (Just a suggestion)

6) I personally think the Gun SFX is just fine, the echo is my favorite, it would just be a tad better with some ambient sfx.

7) Try using fog, that might look nice.

8) Was that screen tearing intentional? If not, try to get that fixed :\

9) Just my opinion, but maybe try a different gun model? Something a bit more recognizable, like a Browning M1911, Beretta M9, HK USP.

Overall it's a very good starter, but that's just my opinion... Someone's probably gonna come over here and start yelling "AMATEUR" at me :\

1) I'll add wind but not sure about birds.

2) Thank you

3) Yeah I see that being essential.

4) Hey, that's pretty good.

5) I wanted a more minecraft feel so next time I'm gonna go or the same thing Clipy or Niety do with changing skins.

6) Thank you

7) I'll be using it more thank you

8) Do you mean the white lines? That's my potato graphics card

9) Yeah sure I see why recognizing that would be more realistic

I'll be sure to credit you and @Czai Knight when remaking it. Peace