The WitherStorm

[Minecraftvinnyq 542]

So I wanted to play with FrozenKerbal148's Witherstorm rig and I did this by accident. also the editing was an accident, and the city was an accident, and i was an a-......wait

[Artamiel Crescent 1.5k]

the blur ruins everything

[Minecraftvinnyq 542]

 

the blur ruins everything

that's supposed to happen.

[PigmanMovie 1.8k]

too blurry

 

[Minecraftvinnyq 542]

 

too blurry

 

it's supposed too to give you that trembling feeling

[PigmanMovie 1.8k]

 

it's supposed too to give you that trembling feeling

maybe you could reduce the DOF or whetever it is

[Czai Knight 434]

You could give a trembling feeling with less blurr. Of course, you said that the blur adds a trembling feeling but maybe try something else that does like flying corpses or people running away, or flying debris, or fire, or explosions.

Also you need to work on your lighting.

Overall, it's good.