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[Quickstreak 249]

just trying to get my rep up

[crustyjpeg 2.7k]

Don't post for rep.   Post to share stuff with the community.

You didn't credit @SKIBBZ for his face rig.

 

Also, try getting practice before posting animations, etc.   

So, here's some tips for next time:

   -Make it move faster. 

   -Use transitions.

   -Add scenery.

   -Add a lot of effort.   No animation is good without a lot of effort.

   -dat music doe.  Don't use ultra-generic dubstep.  That won't get you anywhere.

   -Add idle animations.  That can make it way more realistic.

 

There.

Edited February 5, 2017 by EnderSculptor

[XxEmeraldSquidxX 412]

> Posted for rep

> bad camera movements

>too slow

>flatlands

>that intro

>bad music choice

>that sky

[Caeden117 1.8k]

Pretty much what @XxEmeraldSquidxX said.

And also to add: Cliche characters, cliche plot (Dude fights dude), and music does not sync.

You need to practice alot before you can create something worthy of up-rep. I'm not going to downvote because it'll just add to the unneccessary amount of downrep people give just because its OP's first post.

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

This is bad.

1. Generic intro.
2. Edgy teen characters.
3. Flatlands.
4. Stupid generic fight animation.
5. Asking for reputation.  

Also, rename the topic "EDGY"

Edited February 6, 2017 by EthanForeverAlone

[Shane 2.8k]

*clears throat*

 

Edited February 7, 2017 by Shane

[Sonicxryan 1.3k]

David, add these rules to the forums to make this place great again.
- No dubstep. PERIOD
- No edgy teens who don't look edgy. PERIOD
- You need PERIOD to make rules stand out. PERIOD
- No posting for rep (alright, this one is for real though, PERIOD)

[Shane 2.8k]

is there a hidden rule against posting more than 1 video per topic? 

[Quickstreak 249]

 

@EnderSculptor

 

idle?

 

[crustyjpeg 2.7k]

 

idle?

 

Motion when just standing.  (Breathing, etc.)

[Quickstreak 249]

 

Motion when just standing.  (Breathing, etc.)

oh