My first animation in the program Mine-imator.

[1battlepenguin231 68]

Hi all! I did my first animation in the program Mine-imator.

I'd like criticism so what I made mistakes, tell me what I made mistakes.

 

Edited December 27, 2016 by Pixel_Lime

[NotAn... 441]

The start cinematic was well made. Its pretty good for a starter but the walk cycle... Look at this tutorial to make it better

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Also the slow motion axe is not very smooth.

Edited December 27, 2016 by NotAn...

[1battlepenguin231 68]

Just now, NotAn... said:

The start cinematic was well made. Its pretty good for a starter but the walk cycle... Look at this tutorial to make it better

Also the slow motion axe is not very smooth.

Thanks, i will study this video.

[KicksBrickster 4.3k]

This is surprisingly well done for your first project. I'm very impressed.

Just a tip, if you're going to use the snow particles in MI, then it looks better to not overlay snow particles the way you did. Good work, though.

 

[MBB 568]

Nice way to animate for the first time! Just make sure everything looks smooth next time.

[Kapslock 692]

Great, but the position he is resting after falling looks unnatural, and he should probably roll over on his stomach. 

[Colchy 420]

It's really good, but the first scene is too long, and the walk animation made the rest of the animation look weird.

[Emaniplex 6.3k]

4 hours ago, NotAn... said:

Also the slow motion axe is not very smooth.

2 hours ago, MBB said:

Nice way to animate for the first time! Just make sure everything looks smooth next time.

Here's what I heard: "Do the animation stuff better. Herp derp."  

As for my review, your sense of atmosphere and cinematography is great but your actual animating skills need work. I suggest dropping the face Rigs and practicing with basic movements for now.

Edited December 27, 2016 by Emaniplex

[Simon G. Andersen 2.5k]

The atmosphere is good, but the camera angles is a bit boring. Try give these angles a more cinematic feel to them.

12 minutes ago, Colchy said:

It's really good, but the first scene is too long

There's actually only one scene though...

[willingsas 1.9k]

Holy s%$!$ dude, you should do wallpapers; that first scene looked great.