*Movie Project (clip) so far!

[Zovo 254]

Here is a 14-18 second clip of my very first ever animation (lol cant remember how long it was) I hope you enjoy!

PS do you think its good so far besides the arms not moving at the end?

Heres the vid:

Oh it automatically  embedded the video. Thank you mine imator!

Oh yeah and PPS i have credited the creations I took already  

Edited November 13, 2016 by Zovo

[Warlust 780]

Don't hate on me, k? This is constructive criticism

Pros:

- good scenery

- decent lighting

- particles

Cons:

- Use transitions imo

- The changing of scenes and texts are too fast imo.

- Walking is kinda fast imo

The movie is pretty decent. The only thing that bothered me  is

how everything moves so fast. So yeah... make your animations

a bit slow for the viewers to understand what's happening...

Sorry for english the bad

[Zovo 254]

17 minutes ago, Warlust said:

Don't hate on me, k? This is constructive criticism

Pros:

- good scenery

- decent lighting

- particles

Cons:

- Use transitions imo

- The changing of scenes and texts are too fast imo.

- Walking is kinda fast imo

The movie is pretty decent. The only thing that bothered me  is

how everything moves so fast. So yeah... make your animations

a bit slow for the viewers to understand what's happening...

Sorry for english the bad

Oh Ok Ill try to improve on these things and mainly the animation speed.

by the way thank you for the input and your english is perfect i honestly didn't notice anything

so thank you

 

[Colchy 420]

improve mainly on using transitions for both camera and steve, make the scenes slower because nobody reads that fast.

Appart from that, its really nice looking!

(ps: try to make the last camera have an ease in and ease out, trust me, it will look better)

(ps ps: the walking animation is kinda bad, and it looks like he is floating. try to make him move forward for each step he takes instead of just moving it like that)

Edited November 13, 2016 by Colchy

[Zovo 254]

38 minutes ago, Colchy said:

improve mainly on using transitions for both camera and steve, make the scenes slower because nobody reads that fast.

Apart from that, its really nice looking!

(ps: try to make the last camera have an ease in and ease out, trust me, it will look better)

(ps ps: the walking animation is kinda bad, and it looks like he is floating. try to make him move forward for each step he takes instead of just moving it like that)

 

Looking at this now i'm starting to see quite a few mistakes and I see what you mean by the camera ease in and out

I'll try to look up some tutorials on walk animations too

Other than that thanks

 

[Colchy 420]

2 minutes ago, Zovo said:

 

Looking at this now i'm starting to see quite a few mistakes and I see what you mean by the camera ease in and out

I'll try to look up some tutorials on walk animations too

Other than that thanks

 

i recommend skibbz's walk tutorial https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B0iWu74XdXo

 

[Zovo 254]

54 minutes ago, Colchy said:

i recommend skibbz's walk tutorial https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B0iWu74XdXo

 

Oh Ok thanks Ill have a look at that now

 

Edit:Wow This is actually an amazing tutorial! I see what you mean by gliding/floating

 

Edited November 13, 2016 by Zovo