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This is my 3rd animation. Didn't really make it to look fantastic.

But if you have anything that might help me improve please do so

I am newer to animating so please bear with me

 

 

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Your cinematography is great, the shots were nice, and the effects weren't overbearing but the rest could use work.

Like for instance the voice acting, I can hear you breathing in between lines, and it's hard to understand due to the heavy amounts of unbearable ANGST. I gotta mention the skins, because I genuinely cringed when I saw them, they're just so generic. The animation is decent for a newbie, but y'know, keep working on it.

And finally, the intro, because these get me every time.

I've said it before and I'll say it again! THE TREND OF BROKEN DUBSTEP OVER HARD TO READ FLASHY TEXT NEEDS TO DIE! It's obnoxious, it's hard to read, in some cases even lazy, and it's incredibly unoriginal. Please consider doing something else for it.

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On 9/17/2016 at 8:27 AM, Jovan0896 said:

*When you use lens flare without even exporting the animation in high detail.*

Otherwise this is pretty alright and the voice acting is good.

EDIT: My bad I just couldn't tell :P.

What? It should be in 1080p, did I really screw that up or did you mean something different?

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