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The Battle of The Light Chapter 1:The Fields of Sorrows


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Phew.....I didn't think this through....

But hey.....first chapter! Yey....

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Quick info:

If you signed in to be in the comic, you most likely will be in the next chapter.

I planned a max 5. chapter comic. we'll see...

Credits for:

-BeefRayRulan As the Sniper Squad captain

-MuffinManatee as the Holy General

-EpicJ as the enemy sniper team captain

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don't be angry to my opinion or anything

but u need to put more complex textures

the basic white and blue and yellow an dgary and red colors kinda makes your stuff a bit way too simple, even if the rig is complicated

so please, take my advice, make some texturing or start writing the story

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12 minutes ago, Scot said:

don't be angry to my opinion or anything

but u need to put more complex textures

the basic white and blue and yellow an dgary and red colors kinda makes your stuff a bit way too simple, even if the rig is complicated

so please, take my advice, make some texturing or start writing the story

I know the basic coloring is too easy/simple. I tried, not once, to make rigs with textures, but they don't match each other for me... The results were...not acceptable for me......

Still, thank you for the advice. I will keep it in mind...

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Interesting comic but I couldn't read it after I saw the dude with the inverted cross call the people with normal crosses on their armor "heathen".

A heathen is somebody who doesn't pray. It does has negative connotations, but it means nothing more than someone who doesn't pray. It just really felt idiotic for an anti-christ figure to call the holy figures heathens.
Religious references and topics are not foreign to me, so I do understand that you're trying to convey a sort of battle between evil and good, which is an actual thing that goes on constantly. Evil, being those with the inverted/ St. Peter's crosses and dark colors, and good being those with the correct cross and lighter colors.
More characterization to the individuals would've been nice.

The comic was pretty well done, though.

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On 2016. 01. 25. at 9:06 PM, Joshinja ( ಠ ͜ʖಠ) said:

Interesting comic but I couldn't read it after I saw the dude with the inverted cross call the people with normal crosses on their armor "heathen".

A heathen is somebody who doesn't pray. It does has negative connotations, but it means nothing more than someone who doesn't pray. It just really felt idiotic for an anti-christ figure to call the holy figures heathens.
Religious references and topics are not foreign to me, so I do understand that you're trying to convey a sort of battle between evil and good, which is an actual thing that goes on constantly. Evil, being those with the inverted/ St. Peter's crosses and dark colors, and good being those with the correct cross and lighter colors.
More characterization to the individuals would've been nice.

The comic was pretty well done, though.

Look...I heard peoples called each other heathens because they had a different religion.I heard peoples saying heathen to those who were Christians, but did not pray, because they didn't took it that seriously.

Satanism IS a religion, so if a Satanist calls ex. A muslim a heathen, he means that person is not believing in His religion.

The backstory of the dark soldiers tell about why they use the word "Heathen", and in what context.

I was born in a very Religious family, so i might know how things go with religions.......i knew what i write, and i knew why i write it.

Still, thanx for noticing...

 

I'm lazy writing down facts and other sh....

 

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