Cyprès

simple but beautiful and useful

great work

the lighting is pretty well made, but the scenery would maybe need some work

anyway, great work +1

well, well, well.

i can understand you could have some problems with mine imator.

but it doesn't excuse this lack of work

poses needs work : unrealistic

the lanscape needs work : streched texture, flatlands

the lightning needs work : too bright to induce fear

conclusion, not that bad, but needs work

+1 for encouragement, because i know you can do better

well, some tips to improve :

-work on posing

-maybe use rigs

-work on lightning

-work on editing

-avoid to post fad if you didn't worked alot on your creation(we don't really like fad on these forums :/, even more if it's not well made )

 

You can't see it? It's in the message. :T

i know but...

it looks like there is a problem

where is the picture gone ? D:

 

Thanks a lot! I'll be editing my first post so I can show the image

ok nice ^^

the bloom is ok ^^

+1

also to upload an image with imgur

click on get share link

copy BBCode link

paste on you topic

then you have 2 choices :

• let it like this then submit (the image will appear when you'll submit the topic)

• remove the img /img and the [     ] and press enter (the image will appear instantly on your draft (before you posted the topic))

 

you have an entire month

i know, but it's a month full of studies too

so it'll probably be hard to find time

maybe during the week end it would be ok,

but i don't know if it will suffice

so i'm not sure to have enough time to finish it

but i'll try

well, guess i probably won't have lot of time to do it,

but i'll try

[EDIT]

it wont be possible for this one :/

i have lots of exam during this month

and i have to prepare it :/

hope i'll be able to participate to the next one ^^

hmm maybe you should make the eyes on the sides of the head

anyway, not that bad

On 15/01/2017 at 5:00 PM, MrCreeper666 said:

ow due date in 3 days...

i'll try

well, too late for me :/

maybe next time

well, not bad at all, but...

anyway, got my

flatlands :/

On 31/12/2016 at 3:32 PM, EnderMagic1 said:

I was going for a Tatooine style wallpaper. Since Tatooine is a desert, I'm not sure about scenery

Tatooine is a desert

add some dunes, instead of flatlands

ow due date in 3 days...

i'll try

it's not bad, but...

it needs work on lightning, on posing...

i know you don't really want to improve it,

but i'm sure it could have been much better

if you've put more efforts in your creations

you'd have been more happy about the result, an people

would have liked it more

anyway, rep+1

the rig is very good, and the draw awesome

is it your draw ?

it looks a little like a microwave oven,

but not bad

not bad

but... wait

he can stack water buckets ?!!

well, for the beginner, it's not bad

but you need to work on posing, movements,

and scenery

anyway,

idk, jetpack maybe

add some details to the legs and feets :

by example, special boots, pocket, exoskeleton...

it depends

anyway he looks pretty good like this

the background looks a little empty, but it's really nice anyway

+1

what to say...

posing is not bad, but need some works;

blood texture doesn't really correspond to the path of the bullet;

muzzle flash needs work;

lighting needs work;

and please

stop with flatlands

add scenery

anyway, upvote, hope you'll progress