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Lumie

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  1. The composition is great, effects are great, overall a great wallpaper. My favorite part is how the right hand of the kid is instinctively hovering away from the bird as if the bird had just landed, really good touch, but I'd add some blue tint on the shadows and darken them a little bit to make more contrast. At first glance, it feels kinda flat because there are not many big contrasts in the picture and it feels way to yellow, and yellow is a complimentary color to blue so there was a missed opportunity.
  2. great improvements. You really took the criticism and improved upon it, though I preferred the first pose where his engaging in an attack instead of this one where he stands and looks at the camera angry. Then the skin criticism goes to @The Tan James
  3. Lumie

    ITHAKA M37

    Not exactly, he has increased the hue a pinch to much, which isn't necesscary, most of the edits in this picture is really unnecessary actually, and only makes it look different than how it should look ingame with no edits. I can fully understand how some might find the edit not so bothersome as I do.
  4. Lumie

    ITHAKA M37

    well textured, well rigged, can feel a little overly detailed for some, but I like it as it is. btw please just stop with the over done effects and blur, looks like some teenage girl from instagram took this picture. You're just making it extra hard to see how the rig actually looks.
  5. boring The ATI looks like something that's supposed to be scary, but the eyes just looks derpy to me. Im getting a kids cartoon feel from it. and the background? Why so peaceful, blue calming sky with green grass during day light, and flat land is just great to make everything boring. I dont find flat land acceptable in wallpapers except if you're just showing of your rig or something. the one thing I like though is that his face is perfectly positioned from the sun so his face has this dark shadow feel that makes him a little mysterious and frightening, also the fact that his slightly above the camera angle makes him look more powerful but then again, the eyes ruin everything of that.
  6. ship looks like a ship which is good
  7. Camera is oddly angled for no reason at all, the sky should have clouds or else it just feels to empty and boring, and the back of that boat should be darker. unless theres some else strong light source coming from nowhere. but the sky colors are good choices and the ships reflection is neat touch heres a good example of how dark the shadows on the ship should get with a strong light source like the sun eating up the pictures light exposure
  8. Animate whatever you want m8, but don't share that shit here if it's gonna be Monster school, it's the most overdone, overused and overrated content that we don't need here thank you very much.
  9. Sneak peak? on what? his just standing there, being emotional about... the flatlands...?
  10. Wow this is beautiful, the saturation and vignetting make it feel so much more cold and dead. and oh man oh man I love those visible dust particles a lot, makes the ruins look even older. but i'd probably add some blue and have the light shine some yellow light into the room, just some nice lighting/color contrast would be nice, i think colors are a very important factor to make good wallpapers, but it doesn't need to be, this looks brilliant as it is
  11. Looks pretty neat, but whats the deal with the green clouds?
  12. Boring and stiff poses, and did you for real just give Doctor who facial rigs AND shoe rigs even though we don't see his faces nor his shoe in the wallpaper? why why why would you do this to yourself. other things that also are bad includes; boring lighting, the typical no scenery and also green screen. ... You're making it really hard to be nice, but the rig you made was decent. The character rigged you made that is, the rest you didn't make i'm pretty sure Night is fitting time, I like it very much, and the fog helps a little to remove the boring planes. sorry if i come off as rude, I'm really just trying to help you here bud. First steps of learning is too see all your mistakes and work on them
  13. Cool camera placement. You really get a field of depth with that sword in the foreground, Steve chilling in the middle ground, and the blurry Herobrine in the background (Don't use Herobrine though, his not very original, and very overdone character. The items scattered around in the wallpaper is also very neat touches. Not to overdone like people tend to do, although all that's fine and dandy, I would not recommend trying to make a scary-ish wallpaper in the middle of the day, or at least give it a blue tint so you don't have those warm relaxing colors; it makes the wallpaper just not any frighting. and also, the sword rig looks a little wonky, the pixels are in the wrong places and intertwining and all that, and dirt doesn't crack (unless it's very cold) TL:DR Herobrine unoriginal, cool camera/item placement, not scary though.
  14. No eyebrows Eyebrows are very important to show emotion, and to be quite frank with you he looks pretty dead inside to me. ',:D <= look how happy this smiley is with eyebrows
  15. Lumie

    BAR

    The cow is serving milk in a bar. ... Nojklol but it's really nice, the glowstone on the roof is the only problem i have with it, it's placed very oddly but rest of the bar is really nicely designed and all the small details and rigs are great touches.
  16. Could use some work on their face expressions. That light bulb has weird lighting, the room would be a lot more lit with such a strong lit light bulb, and what's with the weird horizontal lighting that's coming from nowhere? other than that the blue shadows are nice and the table.. That radio looks really nice. and the table looks like.. a table.. which is nice too.
  17. This is no terrible internet phenomenon, how dare you shit talk jojos bizzare adventure Internet phenomena fite me in reel layf
  18. Blur is always so strong dude, u gotta chill with that blur. blur doesn't work like that irl, you can only achieve such blur with macro picture.
  19. I love blood texture, I wish more people would do it, especially blood on weapons, we just need more blood on this forum
  20. Damn das a lot of cake, good lookin' too, but honestly what kind of weird person would eat that watermelon cake, it's just the rind of the watermelon :Z
  21. Well I've personally study how Keep On Chucking does his setup, and the lighting is all fine and dandy on both, the only problem you made was that the fog was way to close so it looks too white and the fog loses its purpose of giving depth, and husky had the fog to far where it didn't give any effect (or maybe there's no fog but i'd prefer fog)
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