Artamiel Crescent 1.5k Posted October 8, 2017 Report Share Posted October 8, 2017 Mike, Chirp, OpHsVinicius and 13 others 9 7 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skjold 7.6k Posted October 8, 2017 Report Share Posted October 8, 2017 When I saw the thumbnail, I liked it. Then when I saw you literally just took still images and wallpapers from google, I removed it. KaryuGraphics, SB7989, Mike and 2 others 5 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOneDoc 0 Posted October 8, 2017 Report Share Posted October 8, 2017 this is cool Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simon G. Andersen 2.5k Posted October 8, 2017 Report Share Posted October 8, 2017 "Amazing". Yeah I get it, it's looks kinda cool, but far from amazing though. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninja Dino 1.2k Posted October 8, 2017 Report Share Posted October 8, 2017 Meh. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaryuGraphics 635 Posted October 8, 2017 Report Share Posted October 8, 2017 still images, and no real effort put in, the intro don't really deserve a +1 rep ShadowGMC 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artamiel Crescent 1.5k Posted October 8, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2017 (edited) 3 hours ago, KaryuGraphics said: still images, and no real effort put in, the intro don't really deserve a +1 rep its a wallpaper intro can't you tell by looking at it? also i put a lot of effort in this unlike you I don't think you can even make this 6 hours ago, Skjold said: When I saw the thumbnail, I liked it. Then when I saw you literally just took still images and wallpapers from google, I removed it. eh, it was suppose to be a wallpaper intro, but I didn't really know what you guys would've expect Edited October 8, 2017 by Artamiel Crescent CatOnCaffeine 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ratchet55 546 Posted October 9, 2017 Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 The camera looks very good and music seem fit I kinda like your intro Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artamiel Crescent 1.5k Posted October 9, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 17 hours ago, TheOneDoc said: this is cool 10 hours ago, hiendiep55 said: The camera looks very good and music seem fit I kinda like your intro thankyou. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowGMC 553 Posted October 9, 2017 Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 if you get triggered that easily by criticism then you shouldnt be on the internet Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artamiel Crescent 1.5k Posted October 9, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 1 hour ago, ShadowGMC said: if you get triggered that easily by criticism then you shouldnt be on the internet i don't think that was useful criticism. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GbStudio 1.6k Posted October 9, 2017 Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 You want useful criticism? The first transition from the first image to the second is lazy. The spinning of a square image is not pleasing to the eye and does not match the style of the video. The images are zoomed in way too much so edges are very sharp and pixelated. Song used is common in a lot of small youtuber's intros. Does not differentiate itself from other videos. Lack of originality. All images are copied from the internet. Camera movement is the same as any other "remixed song intro". Its 2d. Its unsatisfying when the image is zoomed in but the objects in the image are not moving in a 3d plane. The birds for example are expected to move but they're still. Long criticism short: Its lazy, unoriginal, and low quality. You would have a better bet using some intro template from youtube. crustyjpeg, Artamiel Crescent, Kapslock and 2 others 5 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artamiel Crescent 1.5k Posted October 9, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2017 7 hours ago, GbStudio said: You want useful criticism? The first transition from the first image to the second is lazy. The spinning of a square image is not pleasing to the eye and does not match the style of the video. The images are zoomed in way too much so edges are very sharp and pixelated. Song used is common in a lot of small youtuber's intros. Does not differentiate itself from other videos. Lack of originality. All images are copied from the internet. Camera movement is the same as any other "remixed song intro". Its 2d. Its unsatisfying when the image is zoomed in but the objects in the image are not moving in a 3d plane. The birds for example are expected to move but they're still. Long criticism short: Its lazy, unoriginal, and low quality. You would have a better bet using some intro template from youtube. whoa thanks. I will tend to my mistakes and improve Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SB7989 609 Posted October 10, 2017 Report Share Posted October 10, 2017 On 10/8/2017 at 7:31 PM, Artamiel Crescent said: its a wallpaper intro can't you tell by looking at it? It'd be easier to tell if you put "Wallpaper Intro" in the title of the topic. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshidacrafter 290 Posted October 10, 2017 Report Share Posted October 10, 2017 1. You're boasting on something not really boast-worthy 2. Was that a low-pitch "ooph" I heard, or am I hearing things?? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artamiel Crescent 1.5k Posted October 10, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2017 7 hours ago, Yoshidacrafter said: 1. You're boasting on something not really boast-worthy 2. Was that a low-pitch "ooph" I heard, or am I hearing things?? i put 'amazing' in the title because I think its amazing. there's nothing wrong with my own opinions. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick 1.7k Posted October 10, 2017 Report Share Posted October 10, 2017 Overused song. Not really much effort put into it. What would make it better is if you actually made the backround in Mine-Imator and for example made the birds fly in the first part or some wind on the trees going on.. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artamiel Crescent 1.5k Posted October 10, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2017 3 minutes ago, Patrick said: Overused song. Not really much effort put into it. What would make it better is if you actually made the backround in Mine-Imator and for example made the birds fly in the first part or some wind on the trees going on.. i don't know how to... but i wish i could Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaryuGraphics 635 Posted October 10, 2017 Report Share Posted October 10, 2017 7 hours ago, Artamiel Crescent said: ok guys you cant just attack me like a Apache cock. (A cock is a chicken) i get it that the intro is crappy and you guys dislike it, but can you just like chill. if you've never seen an intro like this then don't think its a horrible in one in an instant. Although I didn't specifically say it was a wallpaper intro i think you guys should just understand that when the word 'intro' was typed in, its an intro. Just because you haven't seen a wallpaper intro it doesn't mean that it is a bad intro, its just a different type. If you want to say that its bad in a way or your thoughts on which parts are bad or give useful criticism then that's fine! But then you start saying that its effortless and its crappy because its a wallpaper intro, which is not fine. I am a classic noob beginner animator and I don't have talents at it either. I just like to try new stuff and get better and improve. I like to add random crap titles to my post because I just think its a way to get people's attention and to give my own opinions on my content. Each animation I make is dedicated to me because I really had put effort in them. To figure out to make this intro animation took me more then 3 hours and it took me 2 more hours trying to animate it. And then you assume its just effortless and crappy. Which really annoyed me. I'm here to please people with what I've made and improve from their compliments, suggestions, ideas and useful criticism. I never meant to start any drama since the very start of the topic. I just didn't like the fact that I was treated this way So yeah I got 2 more warning points and I'm not happy about it. I'm sorry, but the Mine-imator Forums are highly critical, and will tell you what they think. So if you don't want to be treated this way, don't put "Amazing" in the title, and shame people that are criticizing it. Artamiel Crescent 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artamiel Crescent 1.5k Posted October 12, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2017 (edited) @ViniciusbrMaster you're really annoying. one more time and I will literally nuke you. If you can't accept the fact that I make contents then don't come at my topics at all. AT ALL Edited October 12, 2017 by Artamiel Crescent Josh The Stupad and ShadowGMC 2 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
trashpack05 106 Posted October 12, 2017 Report Share Posted October 12, 2017 It just feels... off. You COULD have cut out the "Up-close" parts of the image, then the "Far-away" parts of the image into different image files, then slightly animate every part moving maybe a little the the left or right or make the trees wave or something. Well... thats just mai opinion :3 5/10 SharkleSparkle 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SharkleSparkle 479 Posted October 12, 2017 Report Share Posted October 12, 2017 On 10/10/2017 at 11:27 AM, Artamiel Crescent said: there's nothing wrong with my own opinions. ...but there's something wrong with everyone else's..? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowGMC 553 Posted October 12, 2017 Report Share Posted October 12, 2017 On 10/10/2017 at 6:27 AM, Artamiel Crescent said: i put 'amazing' in the title because I think its amazing. there's nothing wrong with my own opinions. 2 hours ago, SharkleSparkle said: ...but there's something wrong with everyone else's..? i smell hypocrisy Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skjold 7.6k Posted October 12, 2017 Report Share Posted October 12, 2017 Can I take what I said back and give a downvote for his childishness in the comments? Well anyways this was a sublime specimen of someone not being able to take criticism, and ended up worse cause of it. I feel like this has gone on for way too long and that we should just let this topic die out instead of letting it be a flamewar. Now that I think of it, isn't it ironic how the topic of a FIREWATCH intro turned into a roasting session? I digress. SharkleSparkle 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artamiel Crescent 1.5k Posted October 13, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2017 I've lost my taste for animating. I'm not even gonna bother to recreate the intro into a better one. I didn't expect this much hate.... Mike 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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