Oc Design Test [Wallpaper]

[EmeraldEmperor 17]

So my friends and I were coming up with concepts for character designs. I decided to turn mine into a render and I created this! 


I created everything in mine-imator alone. No edits.
I also created the skin myself.
I would like some criticism for future references! 
Thank you for your time.
                                                            - Me

Edited September 9, 2017 by EmeraldEmperor

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

Edgy.

[Warlust 780]

He smoke weed cus his eye is too high

[Dr. Cuto 602]

1. Generic skin
2. Lighting
3. Shape
4. Generic skin
5. Generic skin
6. Did I mention Generic Skin?
7. Edgy

[Roosara 553]

My opinion is just about everyone's opinion.

[Benji 1.2k]

The eyes are too high. And the bangs needs to also be a helmet/second layer, so it doesn't look glued to his face.

Edited September 9, 2017 by Foxtrot0806

[EmeraldEmperor 17]

15 hours ago, EthanForeverAlone said:

Edgy.

 

14 hours ago, Warlust said:

He smoke weed cus his eye is too high

 

9 hours ago, Dr. Cuto said:

1. Generic skin
2. Lighting
3. Shape
4. Generic skin
5. Generic skin
6. Did I mention Generic Skin?
7. Edgy

 

8 hours ago, Roosara said:

My opinion is just about everyone's opinion.

 

7 hours ago, Foxtrot0806 said:

The eyes are too high. And the bangs needs to also be a helmet/second layer, so it doesn't look glued to his face.

Thank you for the criticism. I'll work on it!