Steve Life 1

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My first minecraft life animation about Steve life in minecraft world. If you like it- subscribe to me channel on YT. Thank's for whathing)

 

 

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You tried to do some cinematic shots, but they are pretty hard to master. Make them smoother, because it is pretty visible where there is a new keyframe. Make the lightning more interesting, because atm the scene seems unrendered play with the lamps for a while to get a good light angle for the shots. While some of the animations seemed ok - Don't make walking animations by sliding the character, i know that it is much easier, but it looks bad - look up some tutorials for walk cycles. Why aren't the arms of the villagers moving? Or they are, but only a bit. When Steve walks down the stairs you can see that you just made 2 keyframes making him slide and making him go trough the ground. Why isn't Steves face moving? When he goes to chop down wood you can see him sliding trough the ground again while leaving the camera view. Why are Steve's legs moving while he chops down the tree? Whats with the flinching camera movements? When its night use a lamp with dark blue colors, so there are shadows and so you can see something. How did the village set on fire? Seems like an not very well thought out plot. The hitting animation was actually good and the lightning was also decent in this one scene. The hand giving animation was also good. Not so good running again. Try to look up some idle animation tutorials for breathing. And did you make those rigs and schematics by yourself, or you forgot to credit some people?

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You tried to do some cinematic shots, but they are pretty hard to master. Make them smoother, because it is pretty visible where there is a new keyframe. Make the lightning more interesting, because atm the scene seems unrendered play with the lamps for a while to get a good light angle for the shots. While some of the animations seemed ok - Don't make walking animations by sliding the character, i know that it is much easier, but it looks bad - look up some tutorials for walk cycles. Why aren't the arms of the villagers moving? Or they are, but only a bit. When Steve walks down the stairs you can see that you just made 2 keyframes making him slide and making him go trough the ground. Why isn't Steves face moving? When he goes to chop down wood you can see him sliding trough the ground again while leaving the camera view. Why are Steve's legs moving while he chops down the tree? Whats with the flinching camera movements? When its night use a lamp with dark blue colors, so there are shadows and so you can see something. How did the village set on fire? Seems like an not very well thought out plot. The hitting animation was actually good and the lightning was also decent in this one scene. The hand giving animation was also good. Not so good running again. Try to look up some idle animation tutorials for breathing. And did you make those rigs and schematics by yourself, or you forgot to credit some people?

Thank's for your critic) Now i can't find all autors of rigs and schematics, but i credit them in future

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