[MGB] I M M O R T A L I TY : Episode 1 Immqrtal V.S CyberKinq

[Immqrtal 204]

 

If you already didn't know @The Tan James inspired me to make this series, call it a reality knock off if you want cause its just inspired , however once you can make 4min+ MGB animations then you can start talking trash , however improvment comments and suggestions are always welcome.

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

Ew, edgy, flatlands and glowing eyes.

[Immqrtal 204]

1 minute ago, EthanForeverAlone said:

Ew, edgy, flatlands and glowing eyes.

love u

[Tacocat the Animator 149]

Pretty good but like Ethan said, flatlands and glowing eyes... as well as the transitions aren't that visually appealing

[NotChris 2.8k]

TWO MINUTES OF GOD DARN STARING! I PRETTY MUCH CALLED IT!

 

Now time for some constructive criticism.

Need's scenery, lighting, and work on the animation.

[SB7989 609]

That running animation can use some extreme improvement.

[Enchantek 442]

This is the most original animation I've seen in my life.

[Immqrtal 204]

9 minutes ago, Pigeon_ said:

TWO MINUTES OF GOD DARN STARING! I PRETTY MUCH CALLED IT!

 

Now time for some constructive criticism.

Need's scenery, lighting, and work on the animation.

alright wouldnt call it criticism but suggestions thanks and before you make real criticism i would like to see your dedication to making a 4min+ animation

14 minutes ago, Tacocat the Animator said:

Pretty good but like Ethan said, flatlands and glowing eyes... as well as the transitions aren't that visually appealing

thank you , and thx for the suggestion

7 minutes ago, EnchantedAnimations said:

This is the most original animation I've seen in my life.

*sigh*

[Rollo 3.2k]

8 minutes ago, Immqrtal said:

alright wouldnt call it criticism but suggestions thanks and before you make real criticism i would like to see your dedication to making a 4min+ animation

It's not like making an animation rather than a wallpaper relieves you of needing proper scenery or lighting.

[Immqrtal 204]

1 minute ago, Colonel Muffin said:

It's not like making an animation rather than a wallpaper relieves you of needing proper scenery or lighting.

when did i say that?

im just saying that before people talk mad crap they should see how good they are because its no use critising someone that is better than you.(not saying im better than anyone)

[Enchantek 442]

9 minutes ago, Immqrtal said:

alright wouldnt call it criticism but suggestions thanks and before you make real criticism i would like to see your dedication to making a 4min+ animation

thank you , and thx for the suggestion

*sigh*

 

If you learned some grammar, spelling and the definition of criticism, then your argument would be valid.

An animation that's at least 4 minutes long wouldn't really be dedication, it depends on what kind of animation it is. Some people would dedicate days on an animation that's less than a minute long.

Quality > Quantity

[Immqrtal 204]

2 minutes ago, EnchantedAnimations said:

If you learned some grammar, spelling and the definition of criticism, then your argument would be valid.

An animation that's at least 4 minutes long wouldn't really be dedication, it depends on what kind of animation it is. Some people would dedicate days on an animation that's less than a minute long.

Quality > Quantity

im pretty sure i spelt criticism right. how ever this is my quality.if you dont enjoy it leave suggestions not hate.

[Enchantek 442]

2 minutes ago, Immqrtal said:

im pretty sure i spelt criticism right. how ever this is my quality.if you dont enjoy it leave suggestions not hate.

I'm asking for the definition, not spelling (If you would read it carefully I wouldn't be pointing this out)

Anyways, criticism is basically suggestions. Being unable to take criticism will lead you down a bad road, so if you interpret the simplest criticism such as working on the lighting as hate and "talking crap", then people will look down upon you.

[Immqrtal 204]

5 minutes ago, EnchantedAnimations said:

I'm asking for the definition, not spelling (If you would read it carefully I wouldn't be pointing this out)

Anyways, criticism is basically suggestions. Being unable to take criticism will lead you down a bad road, so if you interpret the simplest criticism such as working on the lighting as hate and "talking crap", then people will look down upon you.

i can take criticism how ever how about you re-read your sentence. "if you learned some grammar, spelling and the definition of criticism"

[NotChris 2.8k]

24 minutes ago, Immqrtal said:

alright wouldnt call it criticism but suggestions thanks and before you make real criticism i would like to see your dedication to making a 4min+ animation

If you put dedication into it then how come the animation isn't better than it is now? And from what i'm seeing, you started this about 14 days ago, if you put dedication into it then it would've taken longer.

[Enchantek 442]

2 minutes ago, Immqrtal said:

i can take criticism how ever how about you re-read your sentence. "if you learned some grammar, spelling and the definition of criticism"

"If you learned some grammar, spelling and the definition of criticism, then your argument would be valid. "

When I mentioned spelling I meant the spelling of your comment as a whole.

[Rollo 3.2k]

Guys, I don't want a flame war to start. Can we just agree the video needs a little work and leave it at that?

[Emaniplex 6.3k]

42 minutes ago, Immqrtal said:

alright wouldnt call it criticism but suggestions thanks and before you make real criticism i would like to see your dedication to making a 4min+ animation

@Pigeon_ Dude, just make a ten minute animation where all that the Characters do is stare at each other until the very end when one fighter slaps the other. That'll show him who's the boss.  

Edited March 11, 2017 by Emaniplex

[Immqrtal 204]

1 minute ago, Emaniplex said:

@Pigeon_ Dude, just make a ten minute animation where all the Characters do is stare at each other until the very end when one fighter slaps the other. That'll show him who's the boss.  

how bout you make one hot shot , instead of having another make it.

[SB7989 609]

35 minutes ago, Immqrtal said:

its no use critising someone that is better than you.

Wrong. Very wrong. People that are better than you can still be prone to making mistakes.

Edited March 11, 2017 by SB7989

[Emaniplex 6.3k]

1 minute ago, Immqrtal said:

how bout you make one hot shot , instead of having another make it.

Immqrtal, remember with your brains: you challenged Pigeon, not me.

You realize if he pulls that off we're all going to have a huge laugh at your expense, right?

[NotChris 2.8k]

7 minutes ago, Emaniplex said:

You realize if he pulls that off we're all going to have a huge laugh at your expense, right?

The thing is, is that i'm actually planning several different fighting animations after my current project.

[Immqrtal 204]

7 minutes ago, Emaniplex said:

Immqrtal, remember with your brains: you challenged Pigeon, not me.

You realize if he pulls that off we're all going to have a huge laugh at your expense, right?

laughing? when did i say im better or he is worse? i said i would agree and let you talk trash as much as you want if you would do it. 

[willingsas 1.9k]

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I was gonna make a constructive critique, but i'm gonna leave this instead:

Wow, your animations are so good! Keep up the good work! Upvoted!

[Immqrtal 204]

1 minute ago, willingsas said:

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I was gonna make a constructive critique, but i'm gonna leave this instead:

Wow, your animations are so good! Keep up the good work! Upvoted!

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