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A couple of things:

  • Dubstep intros aren't the best - try something of a different nature.
  • People don't usually blink with their under-eyelids, nor do they make a loud 'shwift' noise when moving their neck. Replace that sound with a more subtle cloth SFX, maybe.
  • Add some scenery - the landscape is quite barren.
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5 minutes ago, Achroma MC said:

A couple of things:

  • Dubstep intros aren't the best - try something of a different nature.
  • People don't usually blink with their under-eyelids, nor do they make a loud 'shwift' noise when moving their neck. Replace that sound with a more subtle cloth SFX, maybe.
  • Add some scenery - the landscape is quite barren.

First of all its not dupstep its trap music

second the reason he blinks on the bottom because im lazy animating the top X D

the shwift sound must be there cuz its a cartoon

must not be realistic... (Exept for the shadows)

i was lazy at the scenery and my mc wont open so yea.....

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38 minutes ago, Dark 8-bit said:

First of all its not dupstep its trap music

second the reason he blinks on the bottom because im lazy animating the top X D

the shwift sound must be there cuz its a cartoon

must not be realistic... (Exept for the shadows)

i was lazy at the scenery and my mc wont open so yea.....

This is why some people shouldn't animate.

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3 hours ago, OfficialCUYT said:

sick intro

 

3 hours ago, OfficialCUYT said:

sick intro

Thanks

9 hours ago, Mafa Animations said:

This is why some people shouldn't animate.

Yea like you

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5 hours ago, TheLionwarrior said:

that intro looks like a template i saw a while back xD

It is a template ( i think )

 

19 hours ago, Dark 8-bit said:

 

second the reason he blinks on the bottom because im lazy animating the top X D

"second the reason he blinks on the bottom because im lazy animating the top X D"

If you are lazy then dont continue animate it, take a break, then come back to it later.

 

Also, why not make an unique intro that fits your channel.

Your name is Dark 8-Bit

Why not make a 8-Bit intro or something.

(I dont mind these 3D dubstep Electro super effect intros, just make it unique)

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5 hours ago, Mafa Animations said:

I was gonna try to come up with a comeback but I don't want to go through that @LolDoge drama again.

And you think thats gonna prevent it? By mentioning ME in that post?

Jk I don't go through it again either, but I suggest when you say stuff like that abotu me, don't mention me using @

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Ok so in terms of basic movement, the animation is pretty good. But you should work a little more on the style you're going for. It looks a little off right now.

As for the rest of the animation, you could have tried harder. The scenery is not too bad because you've set it in a desert, which are usually quite flat, but you will have to have some kind of detail. Even just some extruding blocks to make the ground a little less boring would work.

There is also a continuity error with the suggested position of the penny but that's no big deal right?

Edited by EpicJ
It is a big deal.
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On 23.7.2016 at 5:16 PM, Dark 8-bit said:

First of all its not dupstep its trap music

second the reason he blinks on the bottom because im lazy animating the top X D

the shwift sound must be there cuz its a cartoon

must not be realistic... (Exept for the shadows)

i was lazy at the scenery and my mc wont open so yea.....

1. Either way, it just sounds bad as an intro for an animation, gaming channels can get away with this because it somewhat fits the video

2. it's literally just moving both eyelids at the same time, if you're too lazy for that, i don't think you can be an animator (you'll just end up making really bad test animations and have pages and pages of unfinished projects)

3. Since when do cartoon characters gargle gravel when they look around?

4. c67df4a60c.gif if you're too lazy to add scenery, nobody will watch your animations. Animations with flatlands always suck

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16 hours ago, Shane said:

1. Either way, it just sounds bad as an intro for an animation, gaming channels can get away with this because it somewhat fits the video

2. it's literally just moving both eyelids at the same time, if you're too lazy for that, i don't think you can be an animator (you'll just end up making really bad test animations and have pages and pages of unfinished projects)

3. Since when do cartoon characters gargle gravel when they look around?

4. c67df4a60c.gif if you're too lazy to add scenery, nobody will watch your animations. Animations with flatlands always suck

First of all im a gamer i just moved animating for a while and go back to gaming

and thats why im lazy at animating

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Don't listen to theme, your animation is funny. Just, next time, don't put "Lazy" on your topic, people here don't like this word.

And I still like when my comment don't look the same as the others :D

Btw, you'r better at animating than some peoples who rights hates comment :P

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20 hours ago, Chaukeke said:

Don't listen to theme, your animation is funny. Just, next time, don't put "Lazy" on your topic, people here don't like this word.

And I still like when my comment don't look the same as the others :D

Btw, you'r better at animating than some peoples who rights hates comment :P

Writes* Whats with the font?

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Most of your posts (im thinking all your posts) are in the popular section from hate...

Well ontopic I dont like the intro becauee it's from a template and theres too much dubstep

The animation needs improvement (all your animations actually do)

trying to copy skibbz's breathing cycle (or posing) wont make it good at all.  (Mostly when you didn't do it right)

Needs more scenery

And please for once listen to what we're telling you without trying to start a flame war for once.

Overall score: 3/10

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