Wallpaper Wallpaper's [Critique please]

[Tranto 15]

Hello everyone,

I'm new to this forum.

 

I wanna try to get some critique to my wallpapers:

They are on germanmcpictures.deviantart.com

 

Here are some: 

 

 

 

 

 

I hope I#m doing it right and hope for critique and help ^-^

[KicksBrickster 4.3k]

Well, the only critique I have is that you should mess with the light color a bit. Torches should give of an orange light, Glowstone a softer yellowish light.

Also, adding particles to the torches is a good idea.

[DigitalEvorian 2.5k]

i feel the torches glow a bit much in the cave.

[Tranto 15]

Well, the only critique I have is that you should mess with the light color a bit. Torches should give of an orange light, Glowstone a softer yellowish light.

Also, adding particles to the torches is a good idea.

Yes, I give the torches a bit orange light. The problem is if I add particels the particles are throwing shadows and this looks weird.

[V2lsbGJsM3BpYw== 410]

Yes, I give the torches a bit orange light. The problem is if I add particels the particles are throwing shadows and this looks weird.

In graphics, turn off cast shadows on the particle creator's keyframe.

[kellyeverangel 347]

So pretty  

 

i think they are really nice good effects!

 

[Tranto 15]

In graphics, turn off cast shadows on the particle creator's keyframe.

I can't find what you mean...

[V2lsbGJsM3BpYw== 410]

I can't find what you mean...

On the right, near 'inherit', there should be 'graphics' and underneath graphics, a checkbox which says 'cast shadows'.

[crustyjpeg 2.7k]

I like the posing, the lighting, everything.

[Tranto 15]

On the right, near 'inherit', there should be 'graphics' and underneath graphics, a checkbox which says 'cast shadows'.

Do you have a newer version?

The only thing that I can find with 'graphics' is in the setings of Mine-Imator...

Or could you make a screenshot?

 

I can't find that in the particle creator settings and/or the editor...

[NibbiTz 508]

Well, the only critique I have is that you should mess with the light color a bit. Torches should give of an orange light, Glowstone a softer yellowish light.

Also, adding particles to the torches is a good idea.

His torches have colours actually..

[Cryotivity 2.9k]

So pretty

 

i think they are really nice good effects!

 

Shes a really mean person in the anime... shes probably agreeing with herself tbh

[Mooshim 2k]

Also, mess with the brightness a bit for torches, fires, glowstone and other stuff, that way it looks more like it's producing the light, rather than reflecting it.

[Charcoal Productions 176]