So, I made an animation about a guy who robs a bank! What I am asking of you is to watch the video and tell me what I could improve on in future animations! I have quite a few things I could improve in this animation so I created a list of it along with other noticed errors below (mostly so people don't already repeat an error that I made in the animation)! Be sure to vote how I did in the poll above, I would give myself a 4/5!
Noticed Errors
-Walking animation isn't the greatest
-Talking animation isn't the best in some places
-I need to improve on my talking (so it doesn't sound like a weird robot, human thing)
-Crickets chirping sound effect cuts off suddenly
-Safe access key card is very dark and words can't be seen
-Camera movement in computer room to safe area scene isn't very smooth
-Lava animation is very choppy
Tell me if you see any other errors in the animation!